Posted by phoebe45 | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 30, 2021
Hi i am Phoebe and i love swimming because as long as you have arm bands if they are needed and you are moving your legs and arms you will move as fast as you can go.I also love reading i know your possibly like what? why? it is because it is really interesting and you learn stuff because some books are based on real life like ancient Greece books or world war books you learn about everything there is in the book and about would war ancient Greece.
+ It’s great that you read for interest not just because school expects you to! It’s also fantastic that you are interested in non fiction texts.
? What have you learned about the ancient Greeks? The gods? The legends?
-> When you’ve finished writing a post read through it to make sure your sentences aren’t over long and that your basic punctuation is there.
I like that you have wrote about your favourite thing wich is swimming but,you need to add a bit more punctuation.
I love the informormation that you put up and by the way,it might come in handy.