Posted by munayear5 | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 23, 2021
i enjoy playing football because it is very fun to play and it exciting learning new tricks everyday and i look up to some football players like lionel messi ,cristiano ronaldo, pougba, neymar,mbape and many others so i encourage you to start playing football because i know that you will enjoy playing it.
Well done you have used you punctuation.
+I really like this post because you really put a lot of effort and thought into it. This has really made my think that there is still faith in humanity,you have really have put all you care into this a showing people what you enjoy. This will inspier people to also join you to play Football.
? Is there any other players that you like?Whould you like to be a Football player some day? Is there any other sport you like to play?
-> You post is really good but try not to over long you sentence.
+use more full stops muna
+I really like that you enjoy football and are really positive about it
->Are you good at football?
->Make sure you use capilal letters in your sentences
+ I like how you want to get better and look up to some football players.
– capital letters.
-> you can maybe try playing football everyday and improving.