My karate hamster

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Posted by wsmit88 | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on September 28, 2021

In the summer holidays I didn’t teach my hamster how to do karate to beat Thanos, when he snaps he will take him down before he wipes half the universe.

Comments (2)

+ I love how you made it sound like your hamster was the only person (animal) to defeat him.

? Why doesn’t your hamster join the Avengers?

— > Check for where you need a comma you have a fronted adverbial.

+ I love the way you made it sound like your hamster is a super hero.

? Why doesn’t your hamsterhave the infinity globlet?

->Check where the comma has to go as you have a fronted adverbial.

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